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The Coconut Counting Man

The Coconut Counting Man serves as a rhythmic exploration of the daily journey undertaken by a Trinidadian coconut vendor from the rural landscapes of Mayaro to the urban centre of the Queen’s Park Savannah. This poem by Marc Algernon captures the essence of local entrepreneurship, highlighting the physical labour and logistical dedication required to bring agricultural products to the city market.

It provides a vivid description of the vendor’s routine, involving the harvesting of coconuts with his son, the transit through inclement weather, and the eventual sale to diverse crowds in Port-of-Spain.

The narrative is distinct for its focus on the “coconut counting man” as an apolitical figure defined by work ethic and familial duty rather than party affiliation.

Key Takeaways

  • The Coconut Counting Man depicts the arduous physical process of harvesting and transporting coconuts across Trinidad.
  • Marc Algernon uses rhythmic verse to celebrate the dignity of independent labour and traditional Caribbean livelihoods.
  • The narrative emphasizes a father and son partnership built on hard work and shared economic goals.
  • The Queen’s Park Savannah is presented as a central hub where local culture and commerce intersect.
  • Personal identity in the poem is rooted in trade and self-reliance instead of political or institutional ties.

Analysing the rhythms of the coconut counting man

By Marc Algernon

He’s the coconut counting man…

If you ever go to Mayaro in the dawn of morn

you will see undoubtedly this man of brawn

who climbs these trees with the greatest of ease

to pick this precious nut

whose water provides what no words could describe

with just one simple cut

one by one, he and his son, they load their rusty van

they don’t stop, they load it to the top

he’s the coconut counting man…

when the counting is done, he hugs his son

and starts his long drive to Port of Spain

he whistles a song because the drive is long

even worse it starts to rain

he says, “God washes the nut, wet is better than hot”

in his mind he has a plan

to sell his mountain of gold to those young and old

he’s the coconut counting man…

when he gets to the spot, the sun is blistering hot

at the largest roundabout in the world

The Queen’s Park Savannah, tonight is Panorama,

so much gold to be sold

his blade goes “shwing” and with a few meagre swings,

he cuts a tiny hole

he sticks in a straw, could you want more?

you can even get it cold

his smile grows wide with the feeling inside,

he is as proud as he can

he hums to himself at the growth of his wealth

“I’m the coconut counting man!”

Sure as the air is hot and the water sweet,

he cuts coconut and sells it cheap

he taps his feet to the coconut beat,

he is the coconut counting man…

he is not PNM or UNC

he is not ILP he says, he is he!

that don’t mine he family

and he belongs by the coconut tree

he’s the coconut counting man…

he’s the coconut counting man…

he is the coconut counting man…


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